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1. Bài viết mẫu IELTS Writing Part 1 dạng biểu đồ đường
The line graph compares the number of tourists visiting three countries, namely Country A, Country B and Country C, over a ten-year period from 2010 to 2020.
Overall, Country A and Country B followed contrasting trends, with the former showing a rise followed by a decline, while the latter generally decreased despite some temporary recoveries. By contrast, Country C experienced a sharp downturn initially but ended the period as the most popular destination.
Focusing on Country A and Country B, both countries started with moderate visitor numbers, at just over 20 million and around 36 million respectively in 2010. Tourist arrivals in Country A rose steadily, reaching a peak of approximately 40 million in 2016, before falling gradually to about 25 million by the end of the period. In contrast, Country B saw a significant drop in visitors during the first half of the timeframe, declining to roughly 22 million in 2014. Although there was a brief recovery to around 35 million in 2016, this upward movement was short-lived, and the figure decreased again thereafter.
Country C displayed a markedly different pattern. Beginning with the highest number of tourists at around 45 million in 2010, it experienced a pronounced decline, hitting a low of just over 22 million in 2016. However, this trend reversed dramatically in the latter years. Tourist numbers rose sharply after 2016, overtaking both Country A and Country B in 2018, and culminated at nearly 48 million in 2020, the highest figure recorded on the graph.
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2. Hướng dẫn làm IELTS Writing P1 dạng biểu đồ tròn
The two pie charts illustrate the proportion of people employed in six different sectors in a particular town in the years 2000 and 2020.
Overall, there was a clear shift away from traditional industries such as manufacturing and retail towards service-based sectors, especially education, healthcare and finance. While manufacturing remained the largest employer in 2000, its share declined substantially by 2020.
In 2000, manufacturing dominated the employment structure, accounting for nearly one third of the workforce (32%). Retail and healthcare were joint second, each representing 20%. By contrast, education employed a relatively modest proportion at 12%, while finance was the smallest sector, at just 7%. The remaining jobs fell into the “others” category, which made up just under one fifth of total employment.
By 2020, the employment landscape had changed noticeably. The proportion of workers in manufacturing fell sharply to 19%, matching the figure for other industries. Retail also experienced a decline, dropping to 15%. In contrast, education and finance both expanded significantly, rising to 18% and 13% respectively. Healthcare, although slightly reduced, remained a major employer at 17%, highlighting the growing importance of service-oriented sectors over the two decades.
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3. Bài viết mẫu IELTS Writing Part 1 dạng biểu đồ cột
The bar chart compares the average number of daily working hours in three countries—Country A, Country B and Country C—in the years 2010, 2015 and 2020.
Overall, all three countries experienced a reduction in working hours by 2015, followed by a partial recovery in 2020. Country A consistently recorded the longest working days at the beginning of the period, while Country C showed the most notable increase towards the end.
In 2010, workers in Country A spent the most time at work, averaging nearly 9 hours per day, compared with around 8.5 hours in Country B and just under 8 hours in Country C. By 2015, daily working hours declined across the board. Country A fell to approximately 7 hours, while both Country B and Country C dropped to around 6.5 hours, marking the lowest figures for all three nations.
By 2020, working hours rebounded in each country. Country C experienced the sharpest rise, reaching about 9 hours per day and overtaking the other two. Country B also recovered significantly to just over 8 hours, whereas Country A saw a modest increase to roughly 7.5 hours, remaining below its 2010 level.
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